Friday, March 9, 2007

So I'm writing kind of a fantasy story... Here's the first chapter

Prologue
Roan stood alone on a cliff overlooking the sea. His black fur was graying now and his gait had become much slower than it used to be. He looked out with weak eyes at the ocean. The sun was just setting and soon, another night would begin. Another night for him to be alone.
He had not see Jeshua in years now. He longed for his companion more than anything. His blond hair blew into his face causing the centaur to brush it away. He sighed. Jeshua wasn’t going to come back. He had to face that reality. He would growold and die before he saw the bull again.
Just then, he heard a noise. He spun around, hoping to see Jeshua. Instead, he just saw a faun approach him.
“Still waiting for him, ‘eh Roan?” the faun replied.
This was Petros, a Suffolk faun. Unlike the goat fauns, his horns were like that of a ram’s. His black legs were also graying and his once brown hair was now grey and disappearing. He smiled sadly at Roan.
“I miss him too… but he said he was coming back…”
“He’s not going to come back, Petros…” Roan said bitterly. “It’s been over one hundred years… he will never come back…”
Petros sighed. He patted his friend on the back.
“I know that he’ll come back. I know that you’ll see him again…”
“And you know that you’ll see Kiara again,” Roan mocked. “Face it, Petros… She’s dead… You won’t see her again. She was killed by all of Kiernan’s friends… we’re all that’s left…” Roan wept bitterly.
Petros sighed again and looked out over the ocean. The evening star had just appeared…
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1 comment:

Anonymous said...

You write very well.