Writing a new story

For a concept album..... It started out as something sort of autobiographical and now it's turning into something alot more spiritual... well, it was spiritual anyway.

Anyhow, I have written the first song for this project... I love Garageband. It's makes my awful guitar playing sound good! the music is heavily influenced by the 80's synth pop sound more than rock. I'll be putting up demos for the songs on both my facebook and myspace (http://www.myspace.com/kazidicarli).... I think that's it... If I put it on a different one, I'll be sure to let you know.

Here is a brief synopsis of the songs and such from  my reverbnation blog.

Blind- A young woman, Kazi, is singing to her Spiritual Guardian, Gregor, wondering where he is after he was nearly destroyed by some rather malevolent spirits. She has had so many problems lately that she wonders if he is even around anymore. She wonders if maybe she is just going blind.  

Deaf (working title)- Kazi tries to tell a young man she loves him. He seems to be deaf as no matter how many times she tells him how great he is, he doesn't believe it. frustrated, she believe he is deaf to her.  

Tactile- The Young Man cannot bring himself to hold Kazi when she needs him the most. He explains that it's not her. He just doesn't know what to do for her.  

Forget- Kazi reveals that she is a keeper of memories. She has stored every memory from when she was born until now. She explains how difficult it is for her to live a normal life when she is constantly reminded of her own failures in life.  

Taste- Kazi and the Young Man get a drink. She considers the taste of the beer, the tastelessness of the bread, and soon ponders the taste of the Young Man's sudden kiss.  

Sudden Senses- The Young Man suddenly reveals himself at that moment to be Gregor... or rather a channel for him at the moment. Kazi and Gregor are finally reunited it seems. Gregor, as the Young Man, takes Kazi home  

Out- The Young Man, drunk and no longer channeling Gregor, realises what he has done with Kazi and commands her to leave. After this rage, he realises again what he has done but before he can do anything, he passes out.  

Touch- Kazi reflects on her night with the Young Man and Gregor and distinguishes between the two different touches.  

Forget (reprise)- Kazi, haunted by memories finally has had enough. She finds herself walking absentmindedly across a street. Suddenly, as she thinks of how to forget everything, it is done for her as a car strikes her.  

Smell- The Young Man sits in the hospital room next to Kazi's lifeless body. He is struck by the fact he cannot smell anything for it is so sterile in the room. He suddenly can smell something, the smell of pipe smoke. He cannot see anyone smoking a pipe until he suddenly comes face to face with Gregor.  

Senseless/ Don't Forget/ Touch (reprise)- Gregor explains to the Young Man that he was the last chance Gregor had with connecting to Kazi again. He also tells him of how Kazi was a memory keeper and that the stress of so many memories is what has led to her premature death. The Young Man pleads with Gregor to not let her die as she is his friend, but Gregor tells him it is not for him to decide. The Young Man reflects on his night with Kazi and the vague memories he has of it. He slowly starts realising he does love her as Gregor starts to slowly absorb himself into the Young Man. He finds himself pleading with Death for Kazi's life. Death does not state whether or not he will spare Kazi but instead tells the Young Man not to forget but to always remember what he has learned from this loss. The Young Man find himself singing to Kazi as Death repeatedly tells him not to forget.